作文：on the way to school

on zhe way to school
today,i am walk to school.on the way to school,i can see lots of flower,
Grass,flowers,birds and many of the people there have a pleasant talk together
The sun laugh reddening,roadside flowers smiled bent the waist,a breath of fresh air,pleasant walk to school.
While I went to the school,recall the way I encountered the scenery was very comfortable way to school is so beautiful.
不知道是否可以给点建议呗

去学校的路上

上学路上(On the Way to School)
　　This morning, my father took me to school by bike. I sat at the back of the bike, eating a banana. After I ate it up, I threw the skin onto the street randomly. No soo...