高人做英语改错.I try to understand what you are going through.But i

高人做英语改错.
I try to understand what you are going through.But it's too difficult for me.What i had saw told me:you are a man who has a great difference between soul and outlook.
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faithlhb 幼苗

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要改动的不多
主要是时态的掌握
1 What I had saw told me:
改为 What I had seen told me:
用 have会更好
2 只是建议(没有错)
...what you have been going through.
3 outlook考虑改为 appearance
也可以加上 his soul and his appearance.
现时也流行用 look
即 his look.

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