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I still remember (that改成what) happened to me one day when I was eight.The day I (am改成was) playing with my six-year-old brother,Jack,in the woods near our house.(Sudden改成Suddenly) I fell into a trap.I became very (frightening改成frightened) at that time,and (such改成so) did Jack.Our parents were not at home.Jack told me (加入to) wait.Then he ran away and after a while came back with a long rope.(She改成He) tied one end of the rope to a tree nearby and threw the other (ends改成end) to me.Then I climbed (down改成up) the rope and got out of the trap.I thanked Jack.It was he,my brother of six,who helped me out of (去掉the) trouble.
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