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Hi,everyone!It's a great honor to stand on this stage and perform for you.Although I can’t speak English well,I will do my best and not give up!Well,my name is Kylie ,(中文名),I was born on （时间）in （地点）,The gray hair on my parents' heads increases daily accompanying my growth .My parents are kind to me ,they pass knowledge to me and teach me to be useful to the world.In my mind,they are the best parents on the world therefore I have a happily family.
I like our school very much,because receiving knowledge is a kind of pleasure .I’m the monitor in our class,I have the strong sense of responsibility and the collective sense of honor .Our class is my second home,it is a warm and fragrant community.
I’m an active girl ,so I’m full of energy ,sometimes I play tennis with my mother ,that’s my favorite sports.And my favorite food is chocolate,because it can make you drown into its sweetness .In my spare time ,I usually read books in the library or play the piano .I think piano is the golden key to the Palace of Music.Play the piano is the art of organizing sounds,it’s a rhythmic poem that inspires,a harmonious tone that tranquilizes ,a melody of mystery and beauty.I really enjoy music.
I usually bring happiness and laughter everywhere I go.I have strong ambitions and I'm pretty confident.I’m going to win with my smiling.