一个英语句子纠错“It is a place of interest with convenience of traff

一个英语句子纠错
“It is a place of interest with convenience of traffic that attrasts many tourists pour in every year in my hometown.”我本意是想用一个强调句来表达,我想知道哪里有错误,与更好的表达方法。
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GUOLEI91396520 幼苗

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It is a place of interest with traffic convenience that attrasts many tourists every year in my hometown.要把表语和定语分清楚

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traffic和convenience都是名词可以这样连用吗? 如果想加上“有大批游客来参观”的含义,不能直接用pour in该怎么用呢?“ that attrasts many tourists poured in”作定语行吗?

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可以这样用啊,名词短语。attrasts many tourists已经可以直接修饰place了,再加 pour in这个动词短语就累赘了

pkred 幼苗

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speak of my hometown, it is a wonderful place with several of interested places and convenience traffic, which attracts bunch of tourists every year.

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shuishou040961 幼苗

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It is a interested place for convenience of traffic in my hometown that attrasts many tourists pour in every year.

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冷静的海 幼苗

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My hometown is so a wonderful place with convenient vehicles that many tourists are attracted to come.

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tyg1973 幼苗

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把interested改为interest

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化龙巷 幼苗

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句子呢?句子在哪里?

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