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Year-by-year decline in the export quantity was considered as the dilemma faced by textile exports in Beijing.Based on the researh of main export area,international environment,enterprise self-produced products and a variety of trade barriers,the advantages and difficulties confronted by the textile export enterprises in Beijing were concluded.To improve the international competitiveness of Beijing's textile exports,countermeasures and suggestions for Beijing textile export enterprises on how to upgrade their own products and respond to the pressure of international competition was further proposed.
另,我建议“本文首先提出北京市纺织品出口所面临的困境:出口产品在数量上呈现逐年下滑的趋势,”这句子中的标点符号改动一下,不然别人会认为你所指的“困境”包括后面所有的内容,因为你“困境”后面用了“:”号~
还有几个小问题:
出口产品在数量上下降,指的是生产数量下降?还是出口数量下降?我上文按照出口数量下降先译了~
另外,由于对你们专业不是很熟悉,所以一些专业用语可能有错,你需要自己纠正一下.
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