请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加,删除或修改。

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1,每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2,只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I
scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,
since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized
however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and
shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to
helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel
every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.
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嚣张是我本性 幼苗

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小题1:was后面加in

小题2:scream改为screamed

小题3:could后面加to

小题4:So改为But

小题5:greater改为great

小题6:去掉with

小题7:Beside改为Besides

小题8:helping改为help

小题9:去掉a

小题10:bright改为brightly


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