romeo70
幼苗
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decided that把that换成to.centre后加which.arrived后面的but换成so.clear换成clearly. blood were的were换成was. foot 换feet. Get换成Getting.把stop from的from去掉,flow加ing,把made her way的her换成their,change换成changed,greatfully换成grateful.这样就比较可以了,不过文章读起来怪怪的,不知道出题者是什么水平,要改的通顺就要脱胎换骨了呵呵
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