帮我改改我的英文日记Everything we did is useful.I like this sentence,m
帮我改改我的英文日记
Everything we did is useful.
I like this sentence,maybe too much time of mine is use to do someting that most people think it's not useful -- play computer games.I want to say apart from idle pleasures,I get quite a little.
The games what I have played most are simulation games,so say something about it!Caesar 3 tell me importance of reasonable planning,Simcity 4 show me the money of the government is how to assigned,Civilization 4 let me measure kinds of data.I can appreciate something about architectural and economics in these games.just the guys have played these games can understand what I said.
Let me put it other way.
In game,wrong planning at start will bring many problems can't be ractified later.-- Reasonable planning your time and you won't in confution.
Bigger city not means more profits,too fast development even will bring large budget deficits.-- Control your sesires.
Unleash a war means development become slow and deplomacy have more difficulty,but no army means be conquer.-- We need healthy competition but not malice wound,but need underline of kind-hearted.
Population,research,production capability,money,army,all of these are crucial problem of a rich and powerful nation.-- Many thing is important,but it makes no sense to have one without another.
生命中任何一件事情都会是有意义的。
我喜欢这句话，或许因为到现在为止我的太多时间都花在了很多人认为没有意义的事情的上面--玩游戏，电脑游戏。我想说除了玩乐，除了浪费掉我大量的青春，我真的从游戏中学到了不少东西。
我玩的最多的就是模拟经营游戏，就说说这个吧！凯撒3让我知道合理规划的重要，模拟城市4诠释着政府金钱的分配，文明4让我权衡着各项数据，之间我领略到一些建筑学，经济学的奥妙。这些都只有玩过的人才会知道我在说什么。
那么我换个说法
游戏中一开始的错误规划将必定在后期给你带来很多无法更正的困扰。-- 规划自己时间才不会让所做的事变得越来越混乱。
更大的城市不代表更多的利润，过快的发展甚至带来赤字。-- 我们要控制自己的欲望。
发动战争代表着发展变慢，外交变差，而没有军队却代表被灭国。-- 我们可以良性竞争，却不要恶意伤害，不过善良需要底线。
权衡人口，科研，生产力，金钱，军队，是强盛国家的关键。-- 很多事情对我们很重要，切忌顾此失彼。
这是中文意思
Everything we did is useful.
I like this sentence,maybe too much time of mine is use to do someting that most people think it's not useful -- play computer games.I want to say apart from idle pleasures,I get quite a little.
The games what I have played most are simulation games,so say something about it!Caesar 3 tell me importance of reasonable planning,Simcity 4 show me the money of the government is how to assigned,Civilization 4 let me measure kinds of data.I can appreciate something about architectural and economics in these games.just the guys have played these games can understand what I said.
Let me put it other way.
In game,wrong planning at start will bring many problems can't be ractified later.-- Reasonable planning your time and you won't in confution.
Bigger city not means more profits,too fast development even will bring large budget deficits.-- Control your sesires.
Unleash a war means development become slow and deplomacy have more difficulty,but no army means be conquer.-- We need healthy competition but not malice wound,but need underline of kind-hearted.
Population,research,production capability,money,army,all of these are crucial problem of a rich and powerful nation.-- Many thing is important,but it makes no sense to have one without another.
生命中任何一件事情都会是有意义的。
我喜欢这句话，或许因为到现在为止我的太多时间都花在了很多人认为没有意义的事情的上面--玩游戏，电脑游戏。我想说除了玩乐，除了浪费掉我大量的青春，我真的从游戏中学到了不少东西。
我玩的最多的就是模拟经营游戏，就说说这个吧！凯撒3让我知道合理规划的重要，模拟城市4诠释着政府金钱的分配，文明4让我权衡着各项数据，之间我领略到一些建筑学，经济学的奥妙。这些都只有玩过的人才会知道我在说什么。
那么我换个说法
游戏中一开始的错误规划将必定在后期给你带来很多无法更正的困扰。-- 规划自己时间才不会让所做的事变得越来越混乱。
更大的城市不代表更多的利润，过快的发展甚至带来赤字。-- 我们要控制自己的欲望。
发动战争代表着发展变慢，外交变差，而没有军队却代表被灭国。-- 我们可以良性竞争，却不要恶意伤害，不过善良需要底线。
权衡人口，科研，生产力，金钱，军队，是强盛国家的关键。-- 很多事情对我们很重要，切忌顾此失彼。
这是中文意思
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请参照我的修改,有些词我会换成我认为更好的,大体不会改变原文意思,但有些累赘,错误,不合理之处确实有必要修改.
Everything we did is useful.
I believe this sentence which although some other people do not think so.(要简洁,不要太累赘）But as to(至于）playing computer games,I apart form some pleasures,get little.(从原文意思来看,如此表达即可）
I am about to talk about the simulation games which I have played.For example,I learned the importance of reasonable planning from the game Caesar 3,(注意省略I的用法）known how to assign the governemnt's money from Simcity 4,and so on.Moreover,I meanwhile appreciated something architectural and economic from this games.I think,maybe thoes who have played the same games be able to understand what I said above.
In my view,in this games,wrong planning will bring about many problems can't be ractified(什么东西,是不是ratified生效?）,
on the contrary,only reasonable planning may not make you in confution.
On the other hand,bigger city does means more profit because too fast development even will come to large financial dificit.So control your sesires.
Unleash a war means slow development and difficult diplomacy,which may result in no armies conquered.We need to be in healthy competition and underline kind-hearted virtue instead of malicious wound.
Population,research,productivity(生产力),money and army,all of these are crucial to build a rich and powerful country.Many thing is so important that it makes no sense without any one.
评论：原文主要问题是一些句子不够简练,句子直接的衔接不够（连接词运用）
意思表达大概清楚,一些用语,词有闪光点,希望你取得更大成功.
THANKS VERY MUCH
Everything we did is useful.
I believe this sentence which although some other people do not think so.(要简洁,不要太累赘）But as to(至于）playing computer games,I apart form some pleasures,get little.(从原文意思来看,如此表达即可）
I am about to talk about the simulation games which I have played.For example,I learned the importance of reasonable planning from the game Caesar 3,(注意省略I的用法）known how to assign the governemnt's money from Simcity 4,and so on.Moreover,I meanwhile appreciated something architectural and economic from this games.I think,maybe thoes who have played the same games be able to understand what I said above.
In my view,in this games,wrong planning will bring about many problems can't be ractified(什么东西,是不是ratified生效?）,
on the contrary,only reasonable planning may not make you in confution.
On the other hand,bigger city does means more profit because too fast development even will come to large financial dificit.So control your sesires.
Unleash a war means slow development and difficult diplomacy,which may result in no armies conquered.We need to be in healthy competition and underline kind-hearted virtue instead of malicious wound.
Population,research,productivity(生产力),money and army,all of these are crucial to build a rich and powerful country.Many thing is so important that it makes no sense without any one.
评论：原文主要问题是一些句子不够简练,句子直接的衔接不够（连接词运用）
意思表达大概清楚,一些用语,词有闪光点,希望你取得更大成功.
THANKS VERY MUCH
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