英语好的朋友,麻烦进来看看我的句子为什么老师给这样改了?是我的句子有问题还是表达错了?

英语好的朋友,麻烦进来看看我的句子为什么老师给这样改了?是我的句子有问题还是表达错了?
我写的原句:The best birthday present which was also the first birthday present my boyfriend gave me was a Tiffany bracelet.
老师改的:The best birthday present and also the first birthday present is a Tiffany bracelet that my boyfriend gave me.
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如果是定语从句就别再定语从句中用also ,also一词表示也的意思

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