英文作文改错,Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name
英文作文改错, Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.And Sherry is a name of one of the sweet wine ,just like my character—liking to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as a class teacher for 15 months in NDI.During the 15 months,I get so many help from my colleagues or leaders.So I have learnt a lot of things through do my work.Such as,how to teach my students and get along with them.I still remember what an exciting feeling when the first student told me that she like me teaching her.NDI is a great place which can help the students and upgrade myself at the same time.I was so shine before .However I can communication with everybody.There are so many opportunities to practice my skill of teaching and communication.So I believe that I should work much harder than before to reward my students and my company.
不错!Hello everyone.My name is Sherry.Sherry is the name of one type of sweet wine--just like my character:Bringing sweetness and happiness to everyone .I have been a class teacher for 15 months in ND...
不错! Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. Sherry is the name of one type of sweet wine--just like my character: Bringing sweetness and happiness to everyone .I have been a class teacher for 15 months...
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没有什么大错,但可以稍稍改动,使之更流畅: Hello everyone. My name is Sherry. As you may know, Sherry is the name of a sweet wine , just like my character— I like to bring happiness to everyone .I have been working as...