我写了一篇英语作文,My Winter HolidaysMy winter holidays will end soon

My Winter Holiday
My winter holiday will end soon.Although it's very short,I enjoyed the Spring Festival.The Spring Festral is our traditional festival.During the holidays,I visited my relatives and got a lot of red bags.I could do everything I like,such as reading books,playing games,watching TV,traveling and even sleeping all day and so on.My winter holiday was crazy and exciting.I really have learnt a lot.In a word,I had a nice holiday.So I like the winter holiday very much.
总起来说还是不错的.
我想说的是,the winter holiday是想表达寒假的意思吗,如果是,用单数就可以,寒假就一个；therefore是因果关系中表示所以的,可能你就是想表达所以的意思,不过换成in a word “总之”,更合适些,你说呢；时态注意一下.