求大神看看这篇英语作文有没有什么问题i,

求大神看看这篇英语作文有没有什么问题i,
Unconsciously,I have gone through 13 Spring and Autumn.Now I am a student in Grade Seven and facing the first turning point in my school life.So,I have some trouble.
Such as,Growing up is not a very enjoyable time.It means I have to work hard in studying.There’s always so much homework given by teachers and so many arguments between the parents and me.But there are so much learning tasks,so I cannot finish it on one day,and sleep is also very important,sleeping too late ,is bad for the second day's learning.How can I do?I smile to the pain and spend much time answering this question.Then I list a timetable,arrange the time,accordance with the timetable to complete learning tasks,have good results.This trouble is far away from me.
Although pains are always more than gains,but I believe both of them make my life more colorful.So,pack up your troubles in your old kit bag,and smile,smile,smile.
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losk 幼苗

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这是改过的,你看看
Unconsciously,I have gone through 13 Spring and Autumn.Now I am a student in Grade Seven and facing the first turning point in my school life.So,I have some trouble.
Such as,growing up is not a very enjoyable time.It means I have to work hard in studying.There's always so much homework given by teachers and so many arguments between the parents and me.But there are so many learning tasks,so I cannot finish it in one day,and sleep is also very important,sleeping too late,is bad for the second day's learning.How can I do?I smile to the pain and spend much time answering this question.Then I list a timetable,arrange the time,in accordance with the timetable to complete learning tasks,has good results.This trouble is far away from me.
Although pains are always more than gains,but I believe both of them make my life more colorful.So,pack up your troubles in your old kit bag,and smile,smile,smile.

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天天4127 举报

有语法错误吗,最后一段要不要改改?

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建议改成Although pains are always more than gains, I still believe that both of them make my life more colorful.Therefore, pack up your troubles in your old kit bag and smile.

天天4127 举报

语法翻译呢?

举报 losk

???已经改好了啊,语法就是although和but不能连用啊,已经改了

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其他没有了吧

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