请高手批改一篇高中英语作文Holy place in my mindDo you have a favorite pla

请高手批改一篇高中英语作文
Holy place in my mind
Do you have a favorite place?Maybe everyone will say “yes”.But the answer can be very different.If you ask me,I’d say “the museum” without doubt.In fact,it is more than the favorite; museum is a holy place in my mind.
I don’t remember when and where I went to a museum for the first time.But I surely know I fell in love with it since I was 9-year-old.I joined a chess club at that time and spent forenoon there every weekend.So in the afternoon,I went to museums with mom.They were about many different domains,such as astronomy,history,science and art.It was such a great feeling!
People said that museum was a good place to appreciate and relax.It really was.First of all,it is the quietest place beside the library.There is little people here everyday and people here must be gentle ones.Then,the cultural atmosphere makes people comfortable.I’m an admirer of the history of Egypt,so it’s particularly excited for me to go to the exhibition about what I love.When I stand among the antique here,I’m pleased.
Although I have little time to spend in the museum now,I can’t stop myself loving the place.Not only do I feel good here,but I can learn more out of the class.I can’t know how things become in the future,but the holy place in my mind can be never changed.