雅思+大作文（科技类）+求高手评分

雅思+大作文（科技类）+求高手评分
题目：Moderntechnology, such as fertilizer, pesticide and modern machinery can feed theworld better. However, it is negative to human health.
Modern technology which is consist offertilizer, pesticide and modern machinery is playing an increasingly importantrole in our daily life. It really does good to our health, while at the sametime, it brings something unwanted to us. Some people begin to show a negativeattitude to modern technology and say that it is harmful to our health. As forme, I do not agree with this kind of idea absolutely.
It is undoubtedly that modern technologymay have some advantages. Firstly, with too much modern technology used, ourfood would be polluted. some agriculture products may contain too muchfertilizer and even pesticide which would make the people unhealthy. Also, toomuch noise would be created with the application of modern machinery. Thousandsyears ago, people lived in a rather quiet environment and really enjoyed thesilence that the nature brought us. But everything breaks down owing to themodern machinery.
Though there lie some disadvantages, but itbrings our health much more benefits. On one hand, enough food is supplied withthe help of fertilizer and pesticide. More and more people are there in theworld and we must use modern technology to produce food which contains vitaminand minerals. On the other hand, human being's life can be extended with theapplication of modern machinery. Just as seen in some modern hospital, thereare a plenty of modern machines to help the sick guys. Last but not the least,modern machinery can make us comfortable and release our pressure. When we aretired, we can listen to some
lightsongs played by the MP3. And there are some products that can even help us withour housework.
All in all, modern machinery does muchmore good to us. If modern machinery is used in the right place, human healthwould benefit much more.