段落是英文演讲稿的一部分,除了希望能够修改掉明显的语法错误外,还希望能将语句变得更口语化一点.

段落是英文演讲稿的一部分,除了希望能够修改掉明显的语法错误外,还希望能将语句变得更口语化一点.
In the case study,a dispute has happened in the Flanagan's board room.
Ruth is the marketing director of Flanagan Theme Parks
Ruth Davison intends to cooperate with DailyDilly
Ruth believe that a discount through a social media site could help solve the cash problem
because people pay when the deal is posted,not when they got the service.
However,Allie strongly opposed this plan.
Allie is has been working with Flanagan as a consultant for just over a month
Allie think daily deals aren’t the best way to build Flanagan’s business and Flanagan needs to provide a better customer experience to sustain the business for the long term.
This brings up the question whether to keep the profit to provide a better customer experience or reduce profit to discount.
In other word whether social deal sites could give Flanagan the marketing capabilities