问一篇英语作文怎么写?city of tomorrow

my city of tomorrow
I used to live in a small town with trees all around.There was no tall building and the only street was narrow.Just outside the town,there was a river.You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water.People here lived a simple life.
Great changes have taken place here.You can see tall buildings,big department stores and factories everywhere.Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets.But with the development of the industry,we have fewer trees.Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious.We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.
My dreaming future home town is like a big green garden.In the spring time,my hometown will turn into a beautiful garden grooming with flowers everywhere.The street is covered up with grass.In the summer,I will come out of my apartment to walk my dog.The sky is so blue.I can see the birds flying.All the apartments are painted in green.It’s difficult to tell the different from a green apartment to a big tree.I can smell the fresh air even thought I stay inside my apartment.For sure I will love my future home town.

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