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Recently our class has had a dicussion about whether we should study by talking in free class.Views vary from person to person.
The 45 percent of the students take it granted that we should study by talking in free class.The reason are as follows.
First of all,it can help us to find out a better method to work out some difficult homework.What is more,discussing is a good way to learn and we will have a deep memory on the knowledges that we have gained.Last but not least,it is very important that we can learn from each other.
On the contrary,the rest of students hold that we shouldn’t do that in free class.They think that discussing is easy to make noise so that it will influent other people.And we also can’t consider on our own.
As far as I am concerned,I’m in favor of later.We should think of problems independently.If we have some questions we can consult teachers after class.A quiet environment is good for study.
Recently our class has had a dicussion about whether we should study by talking in free class.Views vary from person to person.
The 45 percent of the students take it granted that we should study by talking in free class.The reason are as follows.
First of all,it can help us to find out a better method to work out some difficult homework.What is more,discussing is a good way to learn and we will have a deep memory on the knowledges that we have gained.Last but not least,it is very important that we can learn from each other.
On the contrary,the rest of students hold that we shouldn’t do that in free class.They think that discussing is easy to make noise so that it will influent other people.And we also can’t consider on our own.
As far as I am concerned,I’m in favor of later.We should think of problems independently.If we have some questions we can consult teachers after class.A quiet environment is good for study.
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Recently our class has had a dicussion about whether we should study by talking in free class. Views vary from person to person.
45 percent of the students take it （for) granted that we should study by talking in free class. The (reasons) are as follows.
First of all, it can help us to find out a better method to work out some difficult homework. What is more, discussing is a good way to learn and we will have a deep memory on the (knowledge) that we have gained. Last but not least, it is very important that we (can去掉,虚拟语气） learn from each other.
On the contrary, the rest of students hold that we shouldn’t do that in free class. They think that discussing is easy to make noise so that it will (influentce) other people. And we also can’t consider on our own.
As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of (the) (later）. We should think (about) problems independently. If we have some questions we can consult teachers after class. A quiet environment is good for study.
45 percent of the students take it （for) granted that we should study by talking in free class. The (reasons) are as follows.
First of all, it can help us to find out a better method to work out some difficult homework. What is more, discussing is a good way to learn and we will have a deep memory on the (knowledge) that we have gained. Last but not least, it is very important that we (can去掉,虚拟语气） learn from each other.
On the contrary, the rest of students hold that we shouldn’t do that in free class. They think that discussing is easy to make noise so that it will (influentce) other people. And we also can’t consider on our own.
As far as I am concerned, I’m in favor of (the) (later）. We should think (about) problems independently. If we have some questions we can consult teachers after class. A quiet environment is good for study.
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