修改一处一分Goals of My LifeEveryone has personal goals.So today I

Goals of My Life
Everyone has personal goals. So today I will (share你的个人目标不能分享,应改为 talk about) my goals (to 要改为 with) everyone.
For study, I am going to get good grades. To make it comes true, I will study really hard and of course do my homework everyday. I will also ask (去掉 some questions to) my teachers and friends (some questions 改放在这儿) if I don’t understand (it 是复数 them). I believe that they can help me to study better than before.
And I will keep my body (health 是 healthy). So I will eat more vegetables and drink milk every day. I will also eat less fast food. They (will make me weakly or ill 应改为 are bad for our health). Hmm…I think I will do more exercise and see doctors twice a year to (inspect 改为 see if) my body (要加 is) healthy or not. (去掉In the free time, 吃水果是饭後吃,那用要等到有空才吃?) I will eat more fruits. Three apples a day, keep(keeps) the doctor away. I think(believe) it is right.
For friends and family, I think I will stay with them more and take them travel around the world. Please remember it, time (will) never (这里你漏了一个字,是 stay 吗?). Please cherish the (time 避免重复,改为 it) when our family (and we get together 改为 is with us).
Goals are like a light, they can give everyone a direction to work hard. I have my goals, haven’t you?

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