我自己用英语造的句子,不对的请提示一下.

我自己用英语造的句子,不对的请提示一下.
今天测验一下自己这一段时间的学习进展,就把老师说的话 翻译在一面.我知道肯定有错误的地方,请达人帮助提示和说明一下.Teacher told us how to improve English listening yesterday .She said:everybody 's english listening was very bad .If everybody want to impaove english listening,Who recommend us to listening a very nice of cours ,it's name call ( listening to this) .