laoshou
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Today is April 2th 2008,Wedensday,it's a sunny day.I get up at 8:30,soon,I finish my revise for the Module 5.
Then I take a No.5 bus to Golden Gulf Mall.There are about 1000 people in the supermarket,among them 40% people are students.I meet a foreigner in floor 3,he is Mr.Will.We talk half an hours.I hope I can try to chat with him once a time.After I buy 2.6 kilos apple,three cokes,I go home happily.
希望能帮到你哦~
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laoshou
那你就错了,我是自己写的,不信你可以下载有道词典或者金山词典输入并让机器翻译,对照我的看看就懂差别在哪了。
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那就请你写的规范一点,不要太口语化。例如:三瓶可乐就写three bottle of coke,不要用比较口语化的three cokes.别的改一下啊,拜托了!
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laoshou
我可以说在口语方面很有造诣哦,(*^__^*) 嘻嘻。我写惯了就这样的,你基于我的原文自己改一下把,如果还有什么问题可以加我QQ345552158聊天哦~我英语不错的