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I Like to Live Countryside
I was born in the city ,so i live in the city all the time.As we know,the envioloment is bad and the traffic is heavy in the city.But in the countryside,there are many flowers and grasses.The air is fresh and the sky is blue.I can help farmers to harvest in fall.My grandparents are living in the countryside,I can live with them happily.I think I must have a good time living there.I hope to live in the countryside someday.
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I like to live in contryside.
since I was born in the city,i live in the city all the time.As we know,the envilonment in the city is bad and the traffic is heavy while in the countryside,the the air is pure and healthy,the flowers are flourishing,the grasses is green and the sky is blue.As my grandparents are living in the countryside,i can live with them,and help them with harvest in fall.I am sure i will have a good time live there.

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I Like to Live in Countryside
I was born in a city ,so i have lived in the city all the time. As we know,the enviroment is bad and the traffic is heavy in the city. But in the countryside,there a...

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