求改一篇英语作文1、2009年11月15日,在昆明市西山之麓,有一个特殊人群生活基地,基地里生活着近100名来自全国各地

求改一篇英语作文
1、2009年11月15日,在昆明市西山之麓,有一个特殊人群生活基地,基地里生活着近100名来自全国各地身高不到1.3米的成年男女,他们年龄最小的18岁,最大的48岁,这里也被人们亲切地叫做“小矮人王国”.“小矮人”们在这里安居乐业,还成立了“小人国艺术团”,为前来参观的游客们表演杂技、魔术及歌、舞、乐等各类节目,受到社会各界的关心和支持.
2、2010年初,为解决袖珍残疾人的就业问题,袖珍人李铭先生创办了“小蚂蚁袖珍人皮影戏艺术团”,团里的艺人是一群身材矮小的成年男女.除了皮影戏的表演外,他们还进行一系列民俗文化演出：变脸、捏泥人、面人、剪纸等.他们的专业表演赢得了众多喜爱他们的观众,甚至激发了很多小朋友开始学习皮影戏这一中国民间技艺.
阅读以上两个材料后,从以下2个写作题目中任选一个完成.
When I saw Zhujie at the China’s Got Talent,as one of the critics called her the little girl,she claimed that the truth was,she was already an adult,not a child like the one in both the critic and the audience’s eyes.This certainly drew my attention to Zhujie and who were in the same situation.I got to know they were members of the ( ).
Of course they are making a living in their own way,maybe a lot of people have the same opinion of their laudableness,but something else also came up to my mind.Are they special?No.They are just normal people like us.They should have the same life like any normal people instead of the life now.Too much attention might hurt them.We ought to help them,yet not to have pity on them.It is the best support to remember,they are the same as us.
字数改到120以内,语法错误帮忙纠正一下……还有用词,感激不尽!