修改短文（改10处）This is a storytold by myfather:"When I was boy th

This is a story told by my father:"When I was a boy,the most exciting thing was when 【we】 celebrated the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best 【cook】 in the word,【and】 could make the most delicious dishes.One time,I just couldn't wait 【for】 the Spring Festival dinner.As I was about to take a piece from a cooked duck,I saw Gradma in the kitchen looking at me.【Shaking】 her head,【she said】 "It isn't a good time to do that,dear." At once,I 【apologized】 and controlled 【myself】 until the diner started.You know,that was a dinner we had waited for 【for】 several 【months】.
自己改的,文章里有些地方语法不同,比如 "controlled me at my beat til" 我改成 “controlled myself".
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This is a story told by my father:"When I was a boy ,the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world.She could make most delicious dishes.One t...

This is a story told by my father:"When I was （加入a） boy the most exciting thing was when（去掉when） to celebrate the Spring Festival.My grandma was the best cooker（cooker改为cook） in the world but（but改为and...