帮忙改一篇初二英语作文Hello.I am Tom.I think Wei Hua’s weekend is very

帮忙改一篇初二英语作文
Hello.I am Tom.I think Wei Hua’s weekend is very busy but fun.Because he does lots of things and had fun with his friends.I also had a busy day last Sunday.At eight o’clock in the morning.I was getting up.Then I brushed my teeth and had breakfast.After that,I rode my bike to the park to do exercise with my friends.First of all,we
run for 15 minutes.And then we played basketball with my friends,too.I went
back at 12:00pm and I had lunch at home.I watched TV in the afternoon.I began to do my Homework at 7:00 pm.Went to bed at 9:30.It was a busy and tired day!
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Hello.I am Tom.I think Wei Hua’s weekend was very busy but fun because he did lots of things and had fun with his friends.I also had a busy day last Sunday.At eight o’clock in the morning,I got up.T...

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1.fun改为funny
2 does改为did
3 was getting 改为got
4run改为ran
5we 改为I
6too去掉
7.12pm后的I删去
8went改为跟前面连起来的 go

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Hello. I am Tom. I think Wei Hua’s weekend was very busy but fun. Because he did lots of things and had fun with his friends. I also had a busy day last Sunday. At eight o’clock in the morning. I got ...

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