我正在学英文,找了篇文章来背发现有问题,希望高手能改下.

我正在学英文,找了篇文章来背发现有问题,希望高手能改下.
The Flight of Youth 青春的飞逝
There are gains for all our losses.There are balms for all our pain; But when youth,the dream departs.It takes something from our hearts,and it never comes again.我们失去的一切都能得到补偿,我们所有的痛苦都能得到安慰；可是梦境似的青春一旦消逝,它带走了我们心中的某种美好,从此一去不复返.We are stronger,and are better,Under manhood's sterner reign; Still we feel that something sweet Following youth,with flying feet,And will never come again .在严峻的成年生活驱使下,我们变得日益刚强、更臻完美；可是依然感到甜美的情感,已随着青春飞逝,不再返回.
Something beautiful is vanished,And we sigh for it in vain; We behold it everywhere,On the earth,and in the air,But it never comes again!美好已经消逝,我们枉自为此叹息； 尽管在天地之间,我们处处能见青春的魅力,可是它不再返回!