夸父追日辛苦
幼苗
共回答了20个问题采纳率:100% 举报
1.less是用来形容不可数名词的,books是可数名词,所以用few的比较级fewer
2.being caught是“正在被抓”,没有这种说法.改为caught是因为前后都是the boy作主语.若改为定语从句则是the boy who had been caught
3.dress作为主动词时意为“给···穿上,给···穿衣”,根据句子的意思,应该是“那个女孩穿着白色衣服”,那么用固定搭配be dressed in,这句也可以说是省略了be
4.一个句子中不可以有两个谓语动词同时存在,所以改为非谓语动词中的ing形式.本句把意思重点放在后面.
5.同4
6.desinging表示主动意义,a system不可能自己desing自己吧?所以用desinged,实际上是省略了be的被动态.
7.其实单独把the lady was wearing拿出来,就是the fur coat was very expensive,the lady was wearing可以算是the fur coat的定语,所以去掉it,不然it前面的句子不完整.
8.这句原来是The money that he bought the bike was given by his father.(bike后加with),楼主是不是抄错了?如果是这样的话,The money that he bought the bike的正确顺序应该是he bought the bike with the money,所以要加个with,表示“用来买单车的钱”
9.同4,一个句子中不可用两个谓语动词
10.定语从句中的which已经指代了the watch,所以去掉it
11.同4
12.All the present at the party people是中式英语,All the people present at the party原为定语从句All the people who were present at the party,修改后省略了who were,让句子显得精简.
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