高二英语写作急

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Beijing named the 22nd of every month as “Seat-giving Day” to encourage passengers on public transport to give up seats to those in greater need,and those commuters who refuse to do so will get criticized.This activity arouses different opinions among netizens.
55%% of the netizens are for the activity because they think,for one thing,it is one of China’s traditional virtues to offer seats to the aged,pregnant women,children and disabled.For another thing,as the capital of China,more passengers’ offering seats can leave a good impression on visitors both at home and abroad.
45%% of the netizens,however,object to the activity ,claiming that giving up seats is a matter of willingness,and passengers should not be forced to do so.
As far as I’m concerned,this activity is surely of great help to set a better image of Beijing.Through such an activity,Beijing will see an increasing number of people willing to do so and an improvement of people’s behavior.