一篇英语小练笔,中学生的,this year is the last years in medium school.Th

一篇英语小练笔,中学生的,
this year is the last years in medium school.This year decide my life in future .Ihave a biggest change :my daily life is defferent.This year is really important ,i need to study harder than ever .For example,before this year ,i went to sleep at 9 o'clock,but now i have to go to sleep at 12 o'clock ,this time ,i also do my homework and other practices .At school i listen to the teacher careful,and take notes every class.
Even though the life is hard ,but i'm interested in it.I can find problems in grammar,i can learn new words in books,I can improve my result.All of results is for a big test.Inthe end ,when I get a good grade,i can find all these are worthy!
主要就是看看有没有语法错误,句式错误,文笔不用太好,能拿分就可以了.
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第一行 years改为year ;in后加my ;第二句有严重语法错误,不对 biggest改为very big
第二行 ever后加before;
第五行 careful改为carefully;every前加in
第六行 去掉even though
第七行第一个in改为from;is改为are
第八行最后一句有严重语法错误
最后,你这是标准的汉语式英语,好好学吧

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