英语翻译Mrs.Wilson,I’m going out shopping,and won’t be back unti

Mrs.Wilson,
华生夫人,
I’m going out shopping,and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm
我要出门购物,在下午5点之前不会回来.
I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.
我带着你要我还的两本书去市图书馆了.
At about 1 o’clock this afternoon,Tracy called,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to.
在下午一点的时候,Tracy 打电话来了,说她明天不能和你在Bolton 咖啡店见面了,因为她有很重要的事要参加.
She felt very sorry about that,but said that you could set some other time for the meeting.
她对此感到很抱歉,说你可以另约一个时间见面.
She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.
他想要你一回家就打电话给他.
She has already told Susan about this change
他已经告诉Susan 这个变动了.
你的,
李华

我自己写的，翻译的，不知道您是什么水平的，所以写的偏简单点的，不知符不符合要求？ 你至少应该写上是关于哪一方面的吧？自己凭空编吗？

Mrs. Wilson,
华生夫人
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm.
我去购物了，下午5点前可能回不来。
I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.

威尔逊夫人：
我要去购物，而且在下午五点前不会回来。我已经把你向我要的两本书还给了市图书馆。今天下午1点钟，特蕾西打电话来说明天上午她不能去博尔顿咖啡店来见你了，因为她有些重要的事情要处理。对此她感到很抱歉，但是她说你可以另外安排时间和你见面。她希望你回家后就尽快给她回个电话。她已经给苏珊说了这些变化。
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