看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.

看看这篇英语作文那些句子不太好,为考四级的练习.
The Imoprtance of Keeping a Good Mood
Nowadays ,with the development of economy,people must face constantly work and a lot of difficulties so that live with pressure everyday. the phenomenon that people haven't motive to do in daily life is very commom.
Moreover ,people think many ways to solve the problem. so people consider that the importance of keeping a good mood .
As far as i concerned ,keep a good mood is very important. on the one hand ,it can help
us to keep a good heathy, it's known that psychological heathy is important so keep a good mood is very important.on the other hand,it can help us to improve us work. if you have a good,you will have motive to do you r work. in our daily life,we must keep a good mood,it can make us happy everyday.and a good attitude towards life.