点评一下我的英文作文Today,I watched a movie called "stray dog house" I

点评一下我的英文作文
Today,I watched a movie called "stray dog house" I looked after very moving.Two children,and they didn't have a home.But they like dogs,first they have a dog - Friday,but then more and more dogs came to this family finally caught their dogs,but they do not give up,they rescued stray dogs,which have one me,"Do you think we have forgotten you Mody?who are they?they are two children,yes,maybe they can not feed themselves,but they dare,so only the stray dogs home.
I love this story .
告诉我语法什么的错误就好了,谢