lewisp03
幼苗
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Do you like sweaters?可以改成 would you like a new sweater that is of the latest cutting for this winter?(你想不想要在这个冬天有一件最新剪裁的毛衣)听起来不会比较生硬.
" We have sweaters in red green and white for only $15." 这句最好把for only $15改成and each costs only $15.因为别人会不知道你是在说三件一共那个价钱还是什么.还有We have sweaters in red green 的 red green 中间加顿号.
通常shorts 不会用beautiful 来形容.你可以改成fashionable就是时尚流行的短裤.也可以给其他物品加上如nice,that is suitable to you,the latest design 等形容词,看上去会更生动
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