我写的考研英语小作文,大概能得多少分?

我写的考研英语小作文,大概能得多少分?
51.Directions:
  A chemical plant should be responsible for the water pollution in a nearby river.Write a letter to the City Environment Protection Agency to
  1) state the present situation,
  2) suggest ways to deal with the problem and
  3) express your sincere hope.
  You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
  Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.
  Do not write the address.(10 points)
正文:
Dear sir
The chemical plant troubled us too much by pouring waste water into the river near our city .It makes a series of environment problems.So we ask for the City Evironment Protection Agency to help stopping it.First of all we can write to the chemical plant by the name of the City Evironment Protection Agency.then we use the weapons of law if they ignore our claim,and they will finally make a concession.In order to keep a good life condition in our city,we expect for your help.
Li Meng
迎风残荷 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

lll50 幼苗

共回答了14个问题采纳率:85.7% 举报

最多6、7分,都没有什么高级的句子,像定语从句什么的搞几个,连接词能用逗号分开的最好分开,感觉结尾也很平庸

1年前 追问

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迎风残荷 举报

最低呢?

举报 lll50

5分吧,毕竟意思都表达出来了,也不容易

guolin415 幼苗

共回答了1个问题 举报

95分,还好吧,
但老师总会挑刺

1年前

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其其boy 幼苗

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我觉得还不错,规规矩矩的一篇文章。范文也就差不多这样了。最高能打8分。

1年前

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