英语作文 let's shou o concern

Nowadays,many people think that college students should take a part-time job for several advantages.For one thing,it gives the students a chance to know the society to learn to be independent.For another,they can also get financial reward and working experience as well,such as teaching or selling practice,which is helpful to their growth.What's more,they can put what they have learned into practice,and know their strong and weak points so that they can improve their studies and personalities,which are beneficial in their later lives.
However,still many people think taking part-time job may have some negative effects on students.In their opinions,it will take them much time and energy,and will affect their studies as a result.What's worse,some students may be so keen on making money that they may neglect their studies in the end.
In my opinion,I am in favor of taking a part-time job.But we have to keep a balance between the job and the study.After all,study is our main task at school.