请帮忙检查语法错误I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see
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I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he once tried to give me some kind of drug with saying that was just vitamin.In addition,he never kept his promise that he made to people and sometimes even denied them.Once I need him to bring something that I really need for the next day,he promised that he would,but usually I can not get them on time.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.As a result,we were not friends any more
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PS，第一句应该是 I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not want see him anymore because his dishonest.
I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not see him anymore because his dishonest.First of all,he lay(撒谎) a lot.For instance,he told his parents that he was studying when he was actually games.Another example was he once tried to give me some kind of drug with saying that was just vitamin.In addition,he never kept his promise that he made to people and sometimes even denied them.Once I need him to bring something that I really need for the next day,he promised that he would,but usually I can not get them on time.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.As a result,we were not friends any more
word 很多时态等错误查不出的 因为老外默认他们不会犯这种错误 所以请不要用word
PS，第一句应该是 I once had a friend who named Bob,but I do not want see him anymore because his dishonest.
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1.I once ---- Once i
2.i do not ---- i didn't
3.because ----because of
4.dishonest ---- dishonesty
5.he lay(撒谎) ---- he lied
6.when he was ---- while he was
7.actually games ---- actually playing games
8.Another example was he ----Another example was that he
9.saying that ----saying it
10.he made ----he had made
11.I need ---- I asked
12.I really need ----I really needed
13.for the next day ----去掉
14.but usually I can not get them ----but actually I didn't get them
15.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.----Moreover,what really drove me sad was that he said i told him to bring it to me on the next week.( drive sb.mad 这一短语搭配更好 )
2.i do not ---- i didn't
3.because ----because of
4.dishonest ---- dishonesty
5.he lay(撒谎) ---- he lied
6.when he was ---- while he was
7.actually games ---- actually playing games
8.Another example was he ----Another example was that he
9.saying that ----saying it
10.he made ----he had made
11.I need ---- I asked
12.I really need ----I really needed
13.for the next day ----去掉
14.but usually I can not get them ----but actually I didn't get them
15.Moreover,really make me mad was,he said that I told him bring to me on next week.----Moreover,what really drove me sad was that he said i told him to bring it to me on the next week.( drive sb.mad 这一短语搭配更好 )
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