帮我看看这段英语有没有什么问题?

帮我看看这段英语有没有什么问题?
Dear,Miss Yan
received and thanks a lot.but,why don`t have the quotation of the CCD?
please sent it again.
Thanks!

宝贝NO听话 1年前已收到4个回答举报

龙女51 幼苗

共回答了28个问题采纳率：89.3% 举报

都不太好,帮你改下.
Dear Miss Yan,
You email is received with thanks,but,why there is no quotation of the CCD?Please send it to me again.
With best regards.

1年前

fyht801121 幼苗

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修改后的,请注意标点等。
Dear Miss Yan,
I have received the Email(把你收到的东西英文替换Email) and apreciated what you have done. However, I didn't find the quotation of the CCD, could you please send it once more?
King regards.

1年前

心烦意乱1981 幼苗

共回答了3个问题举报

没什么问题吧，

1年前

hotvv331 幼苗

共回答了19个问题举报

有点问题你看看这样行不
Dear Miss Yan
I received it and apreciated it. But, can we use the qutation of CCD? Please send it to me again
Thanks a lot!

1年前

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