谁帮我改一个英文句子给25分!这是一个英文改错题,我不会做你们谁帮我改改.请写清楚错在哪里,然后帮正确的写下来谢谢!

This quote appeared on the poster THAT good friends don't let friends drive drunk.
两处错误,第一处：this与here 重复,并且quate后有从句修饰,所以只能删here.第二处：good 前应该加that,已经用大写加上了,good friends don't let friends drive drunk是从句,修饰quate ,所以要加上引导词.翻译我想就不用了吧.

Here in the posters offer a good friend of a friend not to drink driving

this here quote appeared （in） the poster good friends don't let friends drive drunk.
on 改成in