这英语文章好什么要改正I am looking for a job to pay the old bag(the bad

thousand yuan如果只是一千元，要用a/one thousand，前面不能空着。
there 's a paper introducing the job stick on the wall,it doesn't mention the detail,so i called a phone call ①第一句里有is何stick两个谓语动词了，错。应改为：A paper introducing the job was sticking on the wall. ②it doesn't前面应该断开了，前后两句没有关联词了，不能直接逗号跟上，而是要句号结束掉另起一句 ③call sb.或者make a phone call，不能说call a phone call，不然就是“给‘phone call’打电话”的意思了 ④全文是过去的事情，时态别乱，didn't...madei had been waiting for the person who i called 这句话用过去进行式，不用过去完成进行时，因为你没有一个在某时间点之前一直保持某动作的一个时间指向on the way to the work-place ,he's talking all about his two daughters what they had been through,yes they are great people ,graduated at zhangshang university,so on ①On the way前面是句号，别乱用，句子该分要分清楚 ②he's talking里 's 只能用来省略is和has，不能省略was ③about后面his two daughter是一个宾语成分，what they had been through又是一个句子成分，还有后面这些一个个错乱的不规范的并列全部改过来：he was talking about his two daughters, what they had been through, how great they are, that they graduated from Zhangshang University, and so on.here we were, so i knew,the work is cleaning the road for 7 hours,and the salary just 2,000 yuan.我的天，你是中文硬翻过去的？都是些口头语单句拼在一起凑出来的。 没法说怎么改了，因为没有语法= = 我直接重写了：When we got there, I finally knew that the job is to clean the road for 7hours a day, and the salary is only 2,000 yuan.hearing this ,i have a thought to give it up 还是时态别忘了，还有这里的it去掉，因为没有明确指代，虽然我知道是什么意思。I had a thought to give upa person work in my father's retaurant,it's relaxing most of time and it give you three meal per day 直接改了：A job in my father's restaurant is relaxing in most of the time, and it also provides three meals everyday.

错误太多，半个小时也无法改完。

大致意思懂，只是有的细节不太清楚，时态存在很大的问题，所以不好理解，要不你把中文发过来，我在你这基础上帮你改？