看看有没有语法错误或者改的漂亮一点.

看看有没有语法错误或者改的漂亮一点.
i can’t understand what’s life,the meaning of life.
we live for what?money?love?make a career?or just exist?i don’t know.
my friends tell me that i should find a job,then work.yes,just do it.waste time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married with a guy that she didn’t love.she said it’s just her time.marriageable age.she told me that she just want a simple lfe.be married,have a baby,bring up her child,be a successful wife.mama.and secretary.i can’t understand.
i want do somgthing just because i’d like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.
希望口语一点。
呵呵。我知道很烂啦。这么讲外国人能听懂么?口语是不是语法比较随便的?
江湖上的大卫 1年前 已收到4个回答 举报

chrissz 幼苗

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i can’t understand what life is,what is the meaning of life.
we live for what?money?love?making a career?Or just existence?I don’t know.
my friends told me that i should find a job,then go to work.yes,just do it.To waste time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married with a guy that she didn’t love.she said it was just her age to marry.she told me that she just wanted a simple life,being married,having a baby,bringing up her child and being a successful wife,mama and secretary.i can’t understand.
i want to do somgthing just because i like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.

1年前

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mjxyll 幼苗

共回答了19个问题 举报

好象有不少错误啊。。

1年前

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hwphzx 幼苗

共回答了19个问题 举报

I can’t underst what’s life,the meaning of life.
We live for what?Money?Love?make a career?or just exist?i don’t know.
my friends tell me that I should find a job,and then start working.Yes,...

1年前

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dlhb 幼苗

共回答了17个问题 举报

错误太多了 i can’t understand what life is all about.
for what purpose we are living in this world?
wasting time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married a guy that she didn’t love.it's only because that she've reached the age for marriage

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