用英语写一篇作文,要求初中一年级的水平

一楼的,佩服!~ JACK自己不算他家里的人吗? JACK还有兄弟?家庭还可以用HAVE一词?a weekend they go to the park he with he'sister 有they还可以用with?
本人写的：
They are three people in his family:his
moter his sister Kate and he.
On weekends they go to park.Kate likes to read booke, Jack likes to piay soccer with his friends ,his mother likes to play tennis with her brother.They are very happy.

JACK"S family have three people--he parents and sister kate
a weekend they go to the park he with he'sister and brother play water inthe park'river after they go home their thing they have a good time
不是很好吧，但绝对是我自己认真写的，拜托采纳一下，谢谢

JACK"S family have three people--he parents and sister kate
a weekend they go to the park he with he'sister and brother play water inthe park'river after they go home their thing they have a good time

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