请大家帮忙修改其中的错误,或换用更好的句型

I am an ordinary college student in Jiangsu Province,China.I chose a college in my hometown because of a lot of factors. Most of my classmates live in the dormitories while I live in my home. In every morning, I must get up at 6:30.Then,it will takes me 45 minutes to the college by bike.There are four lessons in the morning.After lunch,I get the only chance to chat with my classmates.The lessons in the afternoon will be finished at 3:30.
It will be 4:30 when I get back home. Then,I try to learn something about English and computer.After supper,I will do some reading.I think the life is very tedious.And I feel a little lonely.
建议楼主掌握下定冠词的用法,发现你基本上都要用the,这不是个好习惯.你的句式用的都比较简单,就不帮你一一改正,毕竟这是你的文章.

第二行，because of a lot of things
第三行，everyday;it takes me
第五行，The lessons in the afternoon finishat 3:30;It has been 4:30 when I get home.
第六行，I do some reading

because -because of
takes -take
ride to the college by bike.-get tothe college by bike或者ride to the college
finished- be finished
had-has
I think the life is very tedious.And I feel a little lonely中the改成that

I chose a college in my hometown because a lot of things.
改成I have chosen a college in my hometown because of a lot of reasons.
I live in my house.
应说I live in my home.表示住在自己家。如果你是要强调房子的话应...

because 后跟句子
because of 后跟名词

because (of) a lot of things
it (will去掉） takes
ride to the college (by bike 去掉，重复了）
The lessons in the afternoon (finish) at 3:30
By the time i get back home, it's 4:30 already
learn something (on)
After supper
I (will去掉）do some reading

because后跟句子 will后就不用用一般现在时了 ride 与by
bicycle 不能一起用

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