It was a Saturday evening 改错…………谢谢

It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the(应去掉the) football.With am(应an) important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both(应all) wanted to do well at(应in) the match .Suddenly,one of my friends fell over.I was shocked and run(应ran) towards him.I saw blood on his head.Everyone felt scary(应scaried).After a while,we took him to the nearest hospitals(应hospital).I also called his family to tell them aboutthe accident.When we were sitting and waiting.a(应A) doctor walked(应walked to) us and said that nothing seriously(应serious) had happened and that my friend would recove soon.We were more than happier to hear that.

1. playing football，
2. With an important match coming up the following week
3. we all wanted to do well
4. I was shocked and (then) I ran towards him
5. Everyone felt/was scared.
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。It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing (1 去掉the ) football.With (2 an)important match(3 to come ) the next week.we decided to practice more .We(4 all b)wanted to do well (5 in )...

the football——the删掉
do well at——in
scary-scaried
hospitals——hospital
walked后加to
and that删去that
happier——happy

It was a Saturday evening that(1) my friends and I were playing (2) football.With an important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We all(3) wanted to do well in(4) the match .Sudd...

It was a Saturday evening when my friends and I were playing the (1去掉the)football.With am important match coming the next week.we decided to practice more .We both (2.改成all)wanted to do well at (3 改成i...