谁来帮我完成一道英语改错题?..愿意哒请进!

谁来帮我完成一道英语改错题?..愿意哒请进!
Nowadays lose weight has become popular among woman .For look pretty ,they try to use different ways to lose weight .Some go on a diet ,some take exercise,so some even turn to operation for help .As aresult ,many products have made for them .In my opinion ,it's understandable to women to seek beauty ,but they should do it in a proper way .Having a balance diet is the best way ,because the other ways are likely to do harm to their health.(可以的话,..-___-!先和各位说声3Q!..)
lajiplay 1年前 已收到3个回答 举报

一桅秋水 幼苗

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Nowadays losing weight has become popular among women .In order to look pretty,they try to use different ways to lose weight.Some go on a diet,others take exercises,some even turn to operation for help .As a result,many products have been made for them .In my opinion,it’s understandable to women to seek beauty,but they should do it in a proper way.Having a balanced diet is the best way,because other ways are likely to do harm to their health

1年前

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380202905 幼苗

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losing weight动名词
women
For looking pretty
Some go on a diet, and some take exercise, and some even turn to operation for help.单句需要连接词
As a result
have been made for them 产品是被做,被动语态...

1年前

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jennyhand 幼苗

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Nowadays losing weight has become popular among woman .For looking pretty ,they try to use different ways to lose weight .Some go on a diet ,some take exercise,so some even turn to operation for help ...

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