关于“写一篇自己过去的爱好,外貌,品质的英语作文?怎么写?”

love my previous English teacher very much.He is 45 years old.He always has a pair of golden glasses.His hair is short.He also likes playing basketball and usually plays with us in the playground.Even now he was retire,but he often encourages us that we should study hard and make contribute to China in the future.I like him,because he lost confidence in my learning when to take care of me,counseling me and gave me the power of love,let me success.I miss him very much now and I will never forget him.
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简单但要真情质朴，这样好写点