大家帮我挑挑语法错误吧Good morning,dear teachers and friends!Today,I am
大家帮我挑挑语法错误吧
Good morning,dear teachers and friends!
Today,I am very glad to introduce myself to you
My name is Wang Shiyang,I am twelve years old.Now look at me,can you see I have small eyes,short hair and wearing a pair of glasses?
I like reading,I can get much knowledge from it.My favourite book is《Three Days To See》.Because from this book,I learned how to view the fate.Therefore,I am a firm girl.And I am a very outgoing girl,too.I also like to make friends with people,you are always welcome to our house.
This is me,a lovely girl.Do you think so?
That’s all,thank you.
Good morning,dear teachers and friends!
Today,I am very glad to introduce myself to you
My name is Wang Shiyang,I am twelve years old.Now look at me,can you see I have small eyes,short hair and wearing a pair of glasses?
I like reading,I can get much knowledge from it.My favourite book is《Three Days To See》.Because from this book,I learned how to view the fate.Therefore,I am a firm girl.And I am a very outgoing girl,too.I also like to make friends with people,you are always welcome to our house.
This is me,a lovely girl.Do you think so?
That’s all,thank you.
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can you see I have small eyes,short hair and that I am wearing a pair of glasses？
第二个并列成分的谓语动词和前面不同，我觉得写成两个从句更好些
I like reading,because I can get much knowledge from it。
既然中间是逗号，后面就该是从句
第二个并列成分的谓语动词和前面不同，我觉得写成两个从句更好些
I like reading,because I can get much knowledge from it。
既然中间是逗号，后面就该是从句
1年前
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