谁能帮我检查下这几句英语有无语误?

eply to 是一个片词,而且to后面是接事,不是接人
所以你不能用reply you,也不能用reply to you
而要用reply to your email或 reply to the email you sent me
如果你要接人,可以使用answer,可接事和人：
so I didn't answer you sooner或so I didn't answer your email sooner
"My answers maybe will disappoint you because"
maybe 和will不是用在一起.意思同will和shall不能连在一起使用一样.
改：My answers may disappoint you...
使用may就好,不要再用will.它同样有未来式的意味
"...which I considered it as an ad"
consider后面不能再接it,因为which已经是I consider的受词了,所以你不能再多写一个it.
改：...which I consider as an ad

reply要接to，而且to后面接事物，不是接人
My answers maybe will disappoint you because..改成Maybe, my answers will disappoint you.......
which I considered it as..改成which I considered as.......

上面
错

改为 reply to you
I replied to your first E-mail, which I considered as an ad.
But if you really need a friend who you can talk to
其他没问题

in 放which school前,其他的初看了下没什么问题.