英语纠错-请问这句话有什么错误吗?1

呵2呵,I will not change what you wanted to tell,I only correct your statement to make it better.You will find the difference when you read mine and yours.Which one is 'smoother'?
Of course,school is where the children learn their knowledge.

school is a place where children.........

看了一下上面的回答，最好的应该是 School is where children learn their knoledge, 或者school is where children go to learn their knowledge.

修改如下
Of course, school is the place where children learn knowledge.
当然, 学校是孩子们学习的地方.



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