英语改错 找出10处错Our family are all music lovers.But either my par

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Our family are all music lovers.But either my parents nor I was able to go to a concert for some time.Yesterday,however,they could go to an open air pop concert.We arrive at the place long before it started off.More than half of the audience were teenager and about two-thirds of them were girls.Father said humorous that Mother and he were a minority group.
The concert was a really greater success and we had a very good time.The newspaper reported what the number of people present were five hundred and that a lot of money was contributed.