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As the vividly drawing showes ,a young man has the name of Beckham on his face,and another man has the same hair style with Beckham.This thought-provoking picture illustrates that super star has a huge influence on the youngs.
The influence of super star can affect the youngs in a good way if their social activity is positive and helpful,in addition,the youngs can accept it more easily,because they love their idol,and follow their activities.Thus,the superstar should take the responsbility to lead the youngs to bright future.
On the contrary,if the superstar can not obey their social duty,or even break it,then they will have bad effects on the society ,especially to the youngs.
Above all,superstar's behaviour is not just have effects on himself,but also have directly effects on the youngs,so they should take more social responsibilities to the youngs,and together we can make our society more harmonious.
注意每句开头大写,有一些用法不对,自己对一下我改了哪里吧.
好好学习天天向上.哈哈

由于绘图生动地显示，一名年轻男子有贝克汉姆的名字在他的脸上，和另一名男子有一个发型，这是因为令人深思的图片beckham.this同样表明，超级巨星已经对扬巨大的影响。
巨星的影响可以从对扬了良好的效果，如果巨星的社会活动是积极的，有助于扬，而扬将接受更容易，因为他们热爱自己的明星，并按照them.so超级巨星应采取责任带领到光明future.on扬相反，如果不能证明自己的巨星社会责...

As the vividly drawing showes ,a young man has the name of Beckham on his face,and another man has the same hair style with Beckham. This thought-provoking picture illustrates that super star has a hu...

As shown in the various pictures, a young man has Beckham's name on his face and another man has the same hair style as that of Beckham's. This thought-provoking picture illustrates that superstars ha...